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| Reviews for Fox Among the Leaves |
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   Ranmaleopard 10/28/12 . chapter 1this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue! |
| Akatsuki's Foxy Musician 7/24/12 . chapter 6 i LOOOOOVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEE your story i cant wait for you to update i know that lifes a bitch but i love this story and think of your fans you are such a good writer BYE P.S. UPDATE |
| Vein's Simply Tired 4/3/12 . chapter 6 I particularly love the last part . "I'm not sure about that. He asked us to make a team of skilled heavy combat experts." "Perhaps." "And what else could they be?" "Killers." lol what a lovely way yo end a fic xD thx for making this story _ I hope one day you would find the heart (or time) to continue this :) ,Vein |
| Anonymous Reviewer 12/31/11 . chapter 1 your story is incredible! I love the twist you give this chapter and the twist you put on the naruto universe |
| Whispers in Alcatraz 12/17/11 . chapter 6 This story is great, but a lot of small errors (mostly grammatically) that are happening quite frequently is taking away a lot from the story. Those can be easily remedied by a beta reader, a spellchecker, even a simple read over. Your idea is very original and I hope to see more from you. Another thing I like is the whole team 7 dynamics. Sakura is finally useful, Sasuke isn't an absolute douche bag all the time and Naruto is more mature from the ignorant dumbass he used to be. I'll be on the lookout for you so update (but keep it quality!)! Ciao |
| red-volpe 12/11/11 . chapter 1 I really like the basis of this story, and I can tell it's going to be interesting, but please get a beta! I'm sorry, but I hate to see such an awesome idea get mauled by bad grammar and syntax. I really don't mean to be offensive, but I am anyway, so I hope you can forgive me. Or at least get mad enough to double check for discrepancies between "their" and "there." |
| Guest 9/13/11 . chapter 2 An interesting concept, but you have some serious problems with homophones. They're almost painful, really. |
| Paradoxil 9/6/11 . chapter 2 This irritated me. Why? Because you kept on using "there" instead of "their" and "ether" instead of "either." Besides that it was good, if a little cliche. |
| Irish Shift 6/13/11 . chapter 6 this is a really good story I hope that you update soon |
| Viktorius 4/3/11 . chapter 6 Enjoying this as well! |
| xBud 3/28/11 . chapter 3 good concept. |
| Noradin 2/23/11 . chapter 6 I like your story, but you seem to have a problem with homonyms. A beta might help |
| Rickjames196 2/10/11 . chapter 6 that was hot XD |
| Rickjames196 2/9/11 . chapter 5 nuu over powered sasuke and sakura XD grrr |
| Rickjames196 2/9/11 . chapter 4 poor kakashi ahaha naruto kinda overreacted did he think the test was so he wouldnt pass? |
