Good work. I really enjoyed this story. I'm a little disappointed we didn't get more closure with Dilandau, but everything else tied up well. Thanks for posting!

Well, it didn't turn out as I expected... Still, enjoyable reading...)

Really good story!

OH MY GOD THAT WAS LIKE THE CUTEST ENDING EVER!

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Ack! What an intense chapter! Dilandau is still an ** lol I hope everything works out... And I have been noticing your shameless plugs at the end of each chapter ;) No worries, as soon as I'm finished all of your other stories then I will be going to fictionpress to read Ghost Mist =)

omg Allen didn't lose the award to Hansel, he lost it to Van! Crap, I said I was gonna stop it...

I love this chapter! lol Van as a teen model is just cute, not to mention Folken's fake British accent while he's dressing Van like a Ken doll (I almost typed Barbie lol)

hmm I wonder if Van got all excited cuz of how close they were or cuz she was all dressed up?

lol Allen storming off like that... It's like he just lost the VH1 Fashion Award for Male Model of the Year to Hansel... It's not his fault though, Hansel's so hot right now... Hansel...

Okay seriously I'm done lol Awesome chapter and I'm sure Hitomi was doing great =) And it feels to me like maybe things just might work out with Van. Maybe. As long as he doesn't do anything else stupid lol

Hey all that talk about the carnival made me remember that I forgot to say earlier how funny I thought it was that neither Dilandau or Van could hit the paper target when they went earlier; I thought it was pretty smart too, because most other people would have made them awesome at it just to get a little competition going. Good on ya! Still love the story =) I'm so glad Hitomi told off Dilandau; he's such a two-faced jerk!

I'll use your arm for a pillow! Oh, shoot, he wasn't asking me...

Well there goes all my hopes and dreams... *sigh*

Teehee good chapter though =) I like Folken! Very sincere but kinda mysterious as to where he's coming from, good combo =)

Dilandau seems pretty cocky =P I still love 'em though =) teehee plus if he turns out to be right then Van will be available for me ^^

eek this story makes me so tense! just when it seems like everything is about to fall apart Van does something absolutely adorable!

lol Dilandau is perfect. I love your interpretations of everyone's characters in this story! As for that antelope head, Dilandau probably did kill it himself. With his bare hands. lol

aw they are so messed up lol Van better figure out what the hell he's doing!

aw poor Hitomi... I hope Van can learn to like her for who she is =)

lol Van being a chipper go-getter makes me laugh... it also makes me laugh to see him practically sucking up to his boss! lol this whole story gives me a fit of the giggles. as for Allen being a male model, i'm pretty sure that was what he wanted to be all along. unfortunately they didn't have ad campaigns on Gaea so he had to settle for posing prettily and spouting chivalrous lines lol omg i just thought of Allen saying, "i'm sure there's more to life than being really, really, ridiculously good-looking" lmao i'm done now