I love the poem, but it's a tiny bit confusing to see the resemblance between it and the fic. Could you please write out the fic and put it on another chapter so I can see what you mean better? It's would really help, and besides that it sounds like a good story. Thanks!

It's really fitting to think of Valerie in this poem. Nice job, as always.

Keep using your creative mind. Never stop writing.

-Jae-