^_^ I just wanted to tell you that I love your writing, and that you have an amazing grasp on characterization, as well as how to make your writing flow from one thought too another--there's never too little or too much going on, and you say it all with the right amount of words. One *tiny* typo that happened to jump out at me in this chapter was how you wrote, "Mo one else." It's very minor, but just thought I'd tell you. :) Anyway, I hope you write more for Naruto soon!

LOLOLOLOLOL

Sasuke's just jealous he's not getting any.

Love Tsunade's characterization.

["Most of the time," Naruto said, "I was thinking of ramen while I was getting the girls off."]

...this is great. :Db

Really thought provoking, this chapter. Good job!

PFTT XD I COULD SO SEE NARUTO THINKING ABOUT RAMEN DURING SEX...XD

pwnd

this is my fav chapter
i've only re-read it like 10 times
amazing
truly amazing

^__^ This is my favorite of them all. They are all spectacular, but this one just... Warms my heart, no pun intended.

Beautiful work here. (yes, I'm an extreme platonic SasuHina fan) You really pulled this one off well. *many thumbs up*

You. Are. Amazing. I love this series.

Interesting prompt. I actually recognized this one.

these were fabulous. short, sweet, angsty, fulfilling in a weird way.

(i have to ask, will you update spiral out anytime soon? i'm dying to know what happens!)

Grief and life after.

I wish canonwise Sasuke could do this.

Raw and edgy. I love this couple.

Too true to canon. Riveting.