So sweet! And Allen's startled reaction fits him perfectly! Thanks for this delightful oneshot.

This was very cute. I liked how you displayed Rinali's determination to stay by Allen. It's definately what she would do.

SOO CUUTEE! Haha, he drooled xD

That was SO cute!

this was really cute maybe you could make this into a story.

So I found your story, read it, and then exited, a couple of moments later I had to find it again, because a one-shot that cute deserved a review. I can never find a RinaliAllen fanfic that I like, so I was very happy to have found this one. Besides saying that it was cute and I was glad I found it, I really have nothing else to say. The characters were in character and you did a good job.

I loved that one, too. Allen is such an adorable little hero. Really, really cute. Brilliant job.

This is...amazing. I love this. Rabi is a GENIUS! :D

Thanks for the laughs. :)

Aww. No wonder Allen fell off the bed. Heh heh.

It's very cute Also, really well-written. At first I thought it would lack some description because the paragraphs were so short but it had just the right amount. Hope to see more DGM fics from ya!

I remember you from Simply Love!

Lawl, anyway this was the most smexiest thing I've ever read for -Man so far.

I'm an avid fan of allen x rinali so this was just wonderful. Your writing is clear, yet very very descriptive without going overboard.

Lovely idea too!

SO KAWAII! Finally a good one shot with Allen and Rinali! I was getting so sick of AllenXKanda everywhere. You've restored my faith!

I LAUGH! I cry, sorta. But I Laugh! So Cute! I smile. I smile much. CUTE!

fluffness to the extreme! lol

It makes me feel good.