Well-written and portrayed as usual. My quibble is really one for the show's concept as much as your story: did Deleen truly know Anna was alive? Leading up to the season 3 finale, I would say know, but in season 4 she as much admits it. A challenge to write, and you answered it. Whether or not Sinclair actually said these things, they fit, and perhaps it was 'Valen' and not Sinclair. I would have liked a reference to 'War Without End' influencing Deleen's uncertainty, but that is a personal preference.

I really enjoyed this. All the characters were IC, and the grammar/punctuation was very good.(Plus, I like Delenn and Kosh, old and new
Very good, keep up the excellent writing.

This was a very enjoyable read. Thank you for this. Alex

I thought it was fantastic. Your choice of words and the sentiment that went along with them were, I think, nearly dead-on. BTW, I know exactly what you mean about those voices in the middle of the night.

Great story, it fills a gap in how Delenn feels. It takes a character that alot of us see ass a strong almost saintly type and shows us her weakness. More soon please.

Lovely...that's all I can say...lovely

Nice story! Can easily imagine this having happened.