This was a breath of fresh air. I loved it.
You did a fantastic job of revealing Bart's soft side without altering his personality. I'd give it a 5/5. :)

Awe! omg that was so sweet!

Isnt Kitty's real name Kathleen?

Wonderful! Great detail and I really felt the emotion. You managed to keep Kitty and Bartimaeus in character the entire time.

I thought it was touching at the end because even though Bartimaeus could have broken the pentacle and attacked Kitty he didn't. I really liked it.

Loved it.

is goot, is goot
*translation: GREAT!*
It's sad, but I love the ending twist

wow.Good job keeping everyone in character (cause Ican't do it very well..) update quickly!

yay good story! luv da ending! have you read The Chocolate Obsession by moi? it's really funny, based on alot of hyperness. your story is AWESOME! luv, luv the ending! oops did i already say that? oh well. great story!

Nice fic. IC and well-written. Very good, but very sad; then again, that's exactly how the books were.