:D cheesy smile!

I was pleasantly surprised by this story. I'm not much of a Daniel/Vala fan but this was just a nice story. Very cute, fluffy, and in character. Great job!

Daniel loves Vala, LOL

This is so cute and so Daniel/Vala, I love it!

very cute!

Red

D&V love So KAWAII!

Oh! What a great funny story. I really loved it! Vala and Daniel are the best. Keep up the awsome writting!

so cute. i love D/V!

Great ! I loved it ! Though I haven't understand all the references (we're only at the fifth episode of the nineth season in Belgium). The idea of Vala dragging Daniel in a mall is simply delicious !

Okay now, THAT'S adorable. Great job, I love it!

So, so cute! The thought of Vala dragging Daniel around the mall makes me giggle!

Nice, very nice. Characterisations are spot on; Vala's line of "You're going to teach me how to drive" was perfect in context- made me laugh.

The only snag, in my opinion, was the "Or was it?" directly after "It wasn't like he didn't care for her, but it wasn't *that way*." I find you get the same effect if you have the character repeat the negation, like "Definately not." instead becuase it's a more subtle suggestion to the reader that the character is trying to hide his feelings. I think "or was it?" it too much of a give away, but that's just my opinion. Other than that, I loved it!

Au revoir!

awesome! i love it! it's too cute!

Aww, that was sweet and cute. Loved it loads.

I LOVE this story! It's so cute, and it was real to how the characters act on the show. It's really well written... good job!

Aw, that was cute. I adore DanielVala stories.)