so awesome! so so so so SO cute!

great!

i have to say that there's lots of fluff in here. I like it! you should write more stories like this one.

*sigh* So cute. I love these sweet and fluffy stories. They make me feel all warm inside. Nice work!

I like this piece of work. It's very sweet. If you want, you can make this moment a chapter in a story you can create for yourself. I've been around this site for over 5 years and let me tell you this: you got potential. If you want to really learn the ropes on writing, you have to do a helluva lot of reading. I'm not talking about reading fanfics. I mean reading books, really good novels to your taste. Like Stephen King said: if you can't find the time to read, you can't write. If I were you, I'd sacrifice a lot to find the time to read and create your own stories, not just focus on fics. You got talent, and I hope you won't waste it away. Keep on writing, and keep on growing.

That was beautiful! The kataang fluff was done wonderfully and the plot was good. Can't wait to see yor next story!

Hmm? For an 'amateur' you certainly write well. _

I look forward to more of your work, and I also think its one of the more realistic ways Katara could be enlightened to the fact that Aang is a boy. XD-Jonnoda