|Reviews for Fall Apart Again|
| Karone8718 9/23/08 . chapter 11
Great story. Please write more soon. I really want to know what happens. This is great writing.
| beccabooluvsyou 7/22/08 . chapter 11
i've been thinking about this story all summer!
please update as soon as you get the chance
i really like this story (as i've said in previous reviews)
and love the plot (and can't wait to see keely's dream meanings revealed)
really original and great idea.
i love how they don't "rush things" completely, you know?
it's really sweet.
it seems like you have an idea in the more to come section.
so i'll be waiting
| Fiona Sea 6/21/08 . chapter 11
please write more :) I loved it. im hooked now.
| beccabooluvsyou 5/28/08 . chapter 11
and from the end of ch 10 it seems like there's more written.
please post it!
| beccabooluvsyou 5/27/08 . chapter 11
okay i just have to say
i saw this story many times on fanfiction before i started to read it
i normally wouldn't read a drama by choice (i'm more humor/romance)
but i am so glad i did..
i just thought "let me see what this story is about..."
and after the first chapter i was hooked :)
i haven't been able to get this story off my mind all day..
and i love it.
please update soon!
i love where its going and i can't wait to read more.
| maxthieriotluvr 4/10/08 . chapter 11
First of all, having a baby lets you completely off the hook, I was worried that you were just bored and didn't feel like writing this anymore. Secondly, Phil and Keely are really in for it now and this chapter may have been short but still a nice groove to get you and us back into it.
| Faile Aybara 12/25/07 . chapter 10
I just read this all and I must say it is one of the best PotF stories out their! I don't know if you plan on continuing it, but if you do, I am waiting with extreme exctement!
| princetongirl 9/17/07 . chapter 10
loved it update soon
| Luluz 6/13/07 . chapter 10
GREAT STORY! Update soon!
| Fireopal 5/23/07 . chapter 10
Trying to "bump" this story if that's even possible! I am guessing that school life became hectic for you this semester, but I am hoping that with the summer months coming up we can look forward to more installments of this amazing work.
As a side note, I really enjoy and appreciate the way you describe a character's motions and appearance - it is understated and flows with the story, for example "She covered her eyes with her palms and dug her fingers into the fat, loose curls at her hairline". I love the fact that you include a visual description without simply stating by rote what outfits look like, or makeup, or hair and that you don't disassociate the mental pictures from the action. Kudos!
| Meghan-1989 3/29/07 . chapter 10
You're story is really good...I can't wait to see what that think Mr and Mrs Diffy were talking about.
Please please update as soon as possible.
| EM 3/25/07 . chapter 10
oh wow, you really grabbed my attention. i cant wait until you write more!
| JeanSMX 2/16/07 . chapter 10
Great story, I hope to see more soon.
| boogityboo 1/23/07 . chapter 10
wow. this is the best story i've ever read. honest to god. thank you so much for writing it. and please, keep writing POTF fics.
| RobotNinja 1/21/07 . chapter 10
I will admit, Phil of the Future happens to be one of my terribly (childish) guilty pleasures, and after skimming though the entire section on FF(and by skimming I mean reading all), I'll say this is my favorite story by far. It's quite exciting, entertaining and heartwarming. You've done an excellent job in capturing the characters and their dialogue, which really makes the story worthwhile. The plot is well thought out too, though I can say (even though I happen to really, really enjoy the Pheely moments...) half of me is dying to find out what happens with Keely's dreams! I'm not going to beg you to update soon (though it is terribly tempting), but keep up the great writing and I'll be watching this story for future updates!