I love this! Nicely done!

Very well written. It really shows you that Sharpay isn't exactly the bad one here, even though she acts it. She had everything she ever wanted taken away from her by Gabriella, whos happy, and loved by many people. She is talented, and smart, and Sharpay wants to be her more then anything, therefore resents her because of it. She has every right to act the way she does, yet many people still side with Gabriella.

You put things into perspective for the readers, and did a heck of a good job. :D

xo,

Emmybear

I liked it...I also suck at writing reviews, but, eh, what can you do?

I love your Sharpay, if only for this line: /Like a goddamned Disney movie/ because it would totally be crossing her mind.

I really love it. I'm going to go read the fic that accompanies this oneshot! :)

Ek, your writing is simply wonderful!

hmm...it was a little short and i would have spaced it out a tad more, but i think you did get your point across...well enuff that i loved it!

i love how you depict gabbi as a total fierce bitch! (excuse my french lol) she is NOT the sweetie everyone makes her out to be...she has her own agenda and i love it!

luffly!

~tpx33

My friend recommended this to me and I can see why. It was lovely and I am so glad someone's humanizing Sharpay's character so well. :D

"...you fantasize about what it would feel like to hold those fingers, to have them graze the side of your face as he whispers how beautiful you are."
I can really feel for her...how she felt as she watched Troy slip away from her.

"...you'd get blood on your $500 stilettos"
Lines like that=FABULOUS! :D I love your choice of phrases...so very Sharpay but I can sense the bitterness in her.

"it should be you on the receiving end of one of Troy Bolton's grins, knowing it was you that put that grin there in the first place."
I loved that...and I want to blub coz Sharpay's thoughts are so well written here.

Disney movie, fairytale...perfect tie ins. ;)

"taken the only thing that you've ever loved, the only place you've ever belonged, and stolen it from you. You want to yell at Gabriella for taking your place in the musical, taking the one guy you've ever felt something for, and taking your identity away from you."
So raw and unapologetic..i love it. Fantastic.

How she has to mask her feelings all over again...just to keep up appearances. Sharpay feels so hurt but she fakes the "happy girl" attitude. Its not that she's fake...
Gosh I love how you've written this...making Gabriella the scene stealer.

I cannot wait to read thee sequel or the multi chapter one you've written. I'm so making a date with that fic. ;) Well done, I loved this.

THe point is there, and better for all that it's not shoved in your face.

o...I loved it!

Loved it! SO sad!

omgosh so good CONTINUE

I loved it, it's really great and I think you caught Sharpay's personality in a magnificent way. Great writing and details (I'm a detail freak myself so...lol), any ways it was great!

-Kath

Wonderful story. The last scene in the movie really got me confused on why Sharpay acted so happy when she doesn't really have anything to be happy about. I figured deep inside, Sharpay's just acting happy. She can't really do a 360 degree turn of personality in a few minutes. That is so unrealitically Disney. I'm glad you got to flesh that out in your story. I enjoyed reading it

Wow, that was really good. Great job.

I like it. A lot.

Especially because Sharpay is vulnerable in this fic, but in a subtle way. Because she's not sobbing hysterically on one of Ryan's shoulders because nobody 'understands' the girl beneath the ice facade and omg, her dad is, like, abusing her. Because she actually wants to murder Gabriella, instead of being BFFZ 4 LYF.

It's... very well-written. And I like it. A lot. :)