? im so confused y did u put the whole story on the first chapter than put it on seperate chapters?

I really like your story. I finished it all in one day because I read it non-stop. I think you are a good writer and that you should probably create a sequel or something like that. Great job with the story though. :)

Oh, and YAY go us NZers! :D:D:D

This is a really good story!

And you don't have any reviews! .

Muahaha I'm the first reviewer! Yay.