please write another story i want dish and lorena to have
children.

Nicely written first chapter. Really liked your Lorrie, very true to hera nd who she is. Looking forward to raeding the rest :)
Are you still thinking of finishing this?

This is a great story!! Easily one of the best I've ever read. I love you're portraying Lorrie. Keep up the good work!!

P.S. Have you seen the whole series or read the books? I'd love to talk (or write) about them sometime.

Yay, a twofer update!

What a horrible, unhappy chapter -- but in a good way. I dislike Lorena intensely but I share her disdain for Dish who should get a clue but won't. He'll probably end up wearing her down!

And oh my, I just want to grab July and run him off before his heart gets ripped out and stomped on. OK, I'm biased towards July - he's tremendously pathetic, but I've always loved him dearly.

Your fic is really reminding me just how conflicted I felt about these characters when I read the book. I love them and get frustrated with them by turns. I guess it's a sign that they're well-drawn, by both McMurtry and you.

So glad you've updated! I like the rapport you're creating between Clara & Lorena. And poor Dish!

I didn't really give the Dish/Lorie storyline much thought when I read the book, but this has really got me interested. Do you have any plans to continue?

From what I remember of the book, and it's been years since I read it, Lorie is certainly showing the same kind of abruptness that Clara had towards July. What an unhappy ranch, but compelling characters.

This is such a great story. Your characterization of Dish and Lorena is spot on. Very well written. I'm glad you wrote a post-miniseries story, there is not many of them out there. Please continue :)

How am I the first person to review this? What a shame! I really loved the miniseries and I was unsatisfied with the ending for Dish. I hope you'll continue your story. I enjoyed it, especially Lorie's seeing how far she could push Dish.