 Mistress of Darkness 2007-01-09 . chapter 1Hehe, I've never actually thought of that couple before now... I can totally see it! They're adorable... Anyways, good fic. It was short, but I think that adds to its goodness; short and sweet. Great job - if you write any more I would definately read it! |
 lilviorX 2006-10-14 . chapter 1Aw, that's cute. Although with the 'M' rating, i was kinda hoping for some hardcore- uh, i mean, tasteful slashiness. Maybe a second chapter is in order? I like your descriptions, and the whole thing was in character; didn't notice any spelling/grammar mistakes.
well done.
lil |