Okay, first of all you did a great job for your first oneshot. My first story looks like it was written by a thirteen year old who didn't know the first thing about writing.

I loved the theme you incorporated into here of Tifa needing a hero and Reno obviously not fitting that role. I also like how you made her realize her own faults in keeping her true self bottled up the whole time and not telling anyone.

There was one misspelling that got to me though, alley should be ally but it's not that important, I'm just anal about things like that although I really shouldn't be.

In conclusion, great job and although they obviously didn't end up together in this, I really hope they end up happy in Becoming Tifa. Oh yes, and keep up the brilliant work!

Wow...that really broke my heart. I was really hoping it would work out in the end but that is so sad. I don't know who to blame either! Tifa was wrong to neglect him but Reno, if he truly did love her so, should've been more understanding. This was great, aerisbolt. It really showed human nature. - NekoDono

Wow this was really good! I personally am not one for the Tifa/Reno pairing but I think that you just got me interested. Great job!