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BloodFat
2006-11-10 . chapter 1
Gack! My eyes burn from the shit this story contains!
Adi88
2006-10-13 . chapter 4
WHAT?!

That's one of the best endings I've ever read.

I hate you.
Adi88
2006-10-13 . chapter 3
Gorram it. I don't think it's right that you can make me this invested in people after three chapters when I haven't even seen their shows. Now I'm all kinds of nervous, because she's human, and she has to die, and he's gonna be ALL ALONE and it will be worse because he kissed her. Also, d'you think Ten looks kind of like Wilson?
Adi88
2006-10-13 . chapter 2
Kiki. There's a more solid connection, anywhichway. A woman can recognize you in a different body is one to hold on to. Crack-up laugh line, in a serious kind of way. Damnit, I wish I'd seen this series.
Adi88
2006-10-13 . chapter 1
Oh, so cool. I read it, and then I read the Wikipedia thing on Doctor Who, and now I think I'm a little better off... But this is seriously perfect. The very human connection they've got, kind of uncertainly real, is incredibly beautiful. Normally I don't like OCs, but I wouldn't even have known she was one without your saying so, and anyway she isn't, like, one of the weird ones. [Plus it looks like the show puts 'em on and takes 'em off pretty regularly anyway.] Ugh, this isn't what I mean to say.

The sort of floaty feeling to the beginning is really neat, that stuff about generalizations, and then just like she kind of anchors us in the moment, and it's of the good.

The whole conversation, and then their just-normal sex - so cool. And everything else I said at the beginning. So I'm on to the next chappie.
UnLimit
2006-10-08 . chapter 1
Good story; it was odd though, I don't understand alot - But your style of writing always is fun, and makes it easier to understand.

P.S.: Perhaps, just maybe, I should watch Doctor Who? video. = good.
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