when i read wip the first thing i thought was...women in purple! like guys in white

interesting story. i'd like to read more. please update soon! :D

Hey, I'm lovin' your story, and think you've done a good job of combining the two worlds so far. I'd like to see Harry wandering around in Amity Park soon. Keep writing.

WRITE MORE!

That was a very good story! Can't wait to read the next chapter.!XD XD Hope to read it soon! -

So far, it's one of the better HP/DP crossovers that I've read. It's hard to tell because it's only three chapters long...It's always a shame to see a pretty good story go unfinished.

You really were going somewhere with this one,

Dragon

Ooh!

i like it!

Update soon!

The prologue's really good, works very well to hook people in and the first sentence is great. The rest of it kind of began to annoy me though because, yeah, you had to go back a bit to explain some things but I think you spent to long their without introducing much more plot other than "Harry is coming to Amity" and catching up to events. I guess I would have preferred if you'd used other methods to fill in the gaps and then just got on with the story.

Maybe I'm just impatient but while the dialogue's good I just feel there should be some kind of action by now.

Vlad's portal?

I hope you haven't abandoned this fic, because it's good. Both in plot and in writing, especially since doing good crossovers is really hard.

aren't danny, sam, and tucker forgeting about vlad's portal?...

oh cool. i like how you write! it is...i dunno...readable? some styles i just don't like at all, but yours is...sensible! :D i hope you update this, i wanna know where it goes! :D

cool story hope u update soon

I was wondering after reading your fic and loads of others I noticed something about Dumboldork, even in the books he seems to have a say in Harry's life when he shouldn't. He's a teacher for all intents and purposes, yet he acts like a very controlling guardian, did you notice that? It isn't just your fic though, it's every where. I wounder why.

They forgot about Vlad's portal. Please update. When will Danny and Harry heet each other?