 GhetsisFan03 10/25/11 . chapter 2It's spelled "Growlithe".
The title is too simple and generic. |
 FooFooCudlyPoops 3/23/08 . chapter 1Houndoom, right?
There's my favorite pokemon besides Vaporeon.
It's a very nice poem, but I have a question for you..
Have you ever looked back over your reviews? 'Reviewed your reviews' I guess you could say.
Some of them are very nasty. People do and can have their own stle of writing. They don't always need a book to tell them how to.
Just thought I should let you know, though you might already know anyways.
Oh well.-FFCP2 |
 Eon the Dragon Mage 1/14/08 . chapter 3Great Fic! |
 Eon the Dragon Mage 1/14/08 . chapter 2Darks only act that way because of years of fear and abuse. |
 Anonamia 5/17/07 . chapter 2 "I will not be captured and enslaved, and I will die before I submit myself to scientists, whose very purpose is to destroy all my kind embodies.
Interestingly enough, Farla, for somebody who hates unorgionality in stories, you use things similar to this in almost EVERY STORY YOU WRITE. Fair enough happy stories ain't your style, but it's always a cruel or hopelessly naive/stupid trainer and an emo pokemon reflecting on its fate. No wonder you don't do happy stories: I think the pressure of writing something not wallowing in angst or self-pity might kill you.
The poem at the beginning was nice though. I love the story 'Espeon'. |
 Blackpelt 5/9/06 . chapter 3i absolutely LUV dark pokemon!my favs are umbreon,absol,houndoom(my most favoritist one!)houndour,and...are there anymore of them?i wish that there were.i also like dragon of my favs is salamence(from the newer versions ruby,sapphire and emrald)i am not goth but im saying this:DARKNESS RULES!AND SO DO THE DARK POKEMON!UMBREON! |
 Estuaree 11/20/05 . chapter 3Wow, I never thought I'd read about a Pokemon Mary-Sue. But otherwise this is very well written, enjoyed reading it until the end and this is one of the few 'fics where I don't skip lines or paragraphs here and there. But once again, beating an Onix with an ember? And it also seems unlikely that Damian, in the second chapter, would be standing around while the Growlithe and Houndoom have lengthy conversations. Otherwise I can't find anything to pick at. Good work, I'm glad there's a sequel. |
 Redemmo 10/29/04 . chapter 3neat i like this story as much as i like Espeon. um, sorry if i forgot to mention how much i like Espeon but both are great stories! |
 Dark Phoenix 9/1/04 . chapter 1 Is the pokemon Leader Houndoom?On an up note I totally love Dark pokemon.I play Pokemon colosseum and whenever i'm in a tough match my last pokemon standing is always Yami,my Umbreon! |
 Dusty 11/5/03 . chapter 3 I like the part about the flawed Fire Stone, but it was a little creepy that the Pokemon would have body parts (like heart and lungs) missing if the stone was cracked. That poor Growlithe! Well, very creative story, and I LOVE Houndoom too! |
 Hillside Dancing On 4/14/03 . chapter 3Hehe. I like houndoom. I like him a lot."Liar, liar, burn in fire...
That was my favorite line.
Damien had it coming. Shouldn't have told, idiot. |
 Kitty the dragon 8/28/02 . chapter 3 ::grins evilly I LIKE that. Muahahah... I read some stuff on one of those sites, and I found out Teletubbies are evil! I think we all knew that though... Anyway, keep up the good work! |
 Kiriska 5/30/02 . chapter 3lol. Another good story. I like the pack of houndours..and houndoom...yes...your inspiring me to actually write a pokemon fic again...wow. Greatjob. |
 Prof. Sparky 3/30/02 . chapter 3Wow this is AMAZING! I like Houndoom too! I'll have to check some of those websites, I bet they ARE really funny. The way Houndoom acted reminded me a lot of Mewtwo! |
 Jessiekat 3/18/02 . chapter 3Heheh ... ironic. I happen to be a christian and I don't mind Pokemon. _ Very good 'fic, otherwise, if not a bit dark. . |