 HH 2009-04-30 . chapter 6 I always love your stories. They always tear at my heart a bit. |
 al3n3a 2009-04-27 . chapter 6Great story! Thanks for sharing. |
 totaltheTERRIER 2008-12-30 . chapter 6poor kakashi!! hes been thru so much! |
 stroopery 2008-11-26 . chapter 6 okay, that hurts in all the right way. the angst just -works- for kakashi. as always, lovely characterisation, and the death of minato and rin are especially what got me the most.
well done |
 anbumoo 2008-08-19 . chapter 6This story made me cry. D: Poor Kakashi...
Anyway, I love how you were able to capture their emotions. I don't think I could have put Kakashi through all that and have him come out as the character he is in the series today. Great job; I really really enjoyed this story. :D |
 Golden Mean 2008-08-18 . chapter 6This story was magnificent. Poor Kakashi... |
 JediSpiceGissia 2008-07-12 . chapter 6That was really well done, I liked your take on Kakashi's life and how he faced everything. Well written as well, so I am going to look at your other works as well ^__^
Thanks! |
 InARealPickle 2008-06-10 . chapter 6Can't stop crying
The few funny moments with Gai right before we find out about Rin only made the heartbreak worse
that and since I was still crying from chapter 5, it gave me hiccups.
I think this has to be the saddest fic I have read on FF and I have read literally thousands
::SERIOUS SPOILER if you haven't read "Fated":: (Although if you haven't read that fic by now and you're a Kakashi fan, then you deserve to have your azz kicked.)
It used to be the scene where Sakura sees Kakashi's body in "Fated" by Leafy girl...but At least that fic left the reader with a little hope for the character's future happiness (not much)
But your fic is definitely more of a downer
And I am still having trouble figuring out how that is possible because this was only 6 chapters and Fated was like 30+ of pure angst
I guess YOur angst was of a better quality |
 InARealPickle 2008-06-10 . chapter 5::sob::
::extreme distress::
::sob:: |
 InARealPickle 2008-06-10 . chapter 4what a cute idea
pug-kun to Pakkun does make sense
unless Pak actually has a meaning
but I'm too lazy to look it up at the moment |
 InARealPickle 2008-06-10 . chapter 3oh good lord
I think I'm thoroughly depressed now
How cool is that?!
When you listed this as angst you really meant it! |
 InARealPickle 2008-06-10 . chapter 2Still crying
I know that the story is canon even if more detail is supplied here
It makes me wonder why Kakashi wasn't there more for Naruto
He had to know that Naruto was suffering the same exact way
Yet he thought that Sasuke was more like him? |
 InARealPickle 2008-06-10 . chapter 1I cried
actual tears
over a fic
you can definitely write emotion |
 jadekeca 2008-05-07 . chapter 1I know this is written long time ago, but I still want to say how well written it is. I especially like the fact that 3-year old Kakashi acted like a 3-year old in your story. Many other fics have him as a very cool and mature youngster, but I believe he can't ALWAYS be like that. Good to see him reacted like a normal kid under the situations in this chapter. |
 Peeka-chan 2008-05-06 . chapter 6Wow...This is very powerful writing. Near the end, I could barely see the screen because I was crying so hard. I really liked the interaction between Rin and Kakashi and the father-son moments nearly broke my heart. I enjoyed this story greatly. Thank you for writing it.
~Peeka-chan |