hm interesting. it would explaine why tim was kneeling in the episode. good work!

did not happen? it seems like it could've! or if anything... SHOULD have. Plus, the ending part with Gibbs makes sense as to how Gibbs made McGee kneel! amazing story! keep up the great work! :D

I rarely read McAbby but I'm glad I gave this one a chance, probably 'cause it had to do with my fave ep, but whatever. Very cool.)

great story

I love this! Keep up the good work and keep writing about NCIS! I love the show!

This definately deserves more reveiws to go along with the ones you already have. Sadly, I only give one at a time, so you'll have to get the next one from someone else.)

teehee- I LOVED this version even more- haha- i KNOW what you are thinking and yeah you're right- i need to keep my mind OUT of the gutter- haha

So this version had some added , let's call them "highlights".

Nothing wrong with a bit of McAbby going all the way!

ok cool go mcabby rock on

LOVED IT!-KC

HA HA HA.

Love it.

655321.

"He’s like Santa Claus," he reminded her."More so next season," she said. "Wait for the beard.
HILARIOUS.

And hot.)

Ok, this is a FANTASTIC fic, so, why no reviews? I've read the other version too, and but the comment of McGee's father and the typwriter gave me a giggle.“I thought you hated your father.“I did, that’s why I liked it: it reminds me that he’s *dead*.
Ah, family hate, and the Gibbs line“You will kneel!
Funny enough, but Monty Python kept popping into my mind when I read that in both fics.

Anyway, I'm hoping to have a fic up soon, *my first*. And this has inspired me to continue.

Of course, from one Aussie to the other