hmm...this looks discontinued It's a shame, I was really enjoying it so far

I couldn't stop laughing through the whole thing! I hope you're still alive and will continue soon!

Hehehe. You should update it. it's hilarious. Random. AND THE ACTION IS JUST ABOUT TO HAPEN! ]. Pleeaase? I hope my review will 'motivate' you. Even though it's been, four years? Yeahh.

HAHA. ]. I love ChibiVeemon. "Takeru has jewels?]

i ADORE this!

it's INDREDIBLE!

OMGOMGOMG!

PLEASE UPDATE THIS!

This is very good writng. I like the flow of dialogue. You do plan to end this right?

NO! Must. Have. More... *twitch, twitch* Daisuke and Takeru have to fuck... have to...

BWAHAHAH!WONDERFUL!UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

Chibimon is precious! I love his comments when others are having depper, more devious conversations.

This really made me laugh.

I do hope you decide to write more!

Because its really interesting!

*lol* Should be interesting...So who does Yamato likes? *snicker* I think TK might be right about the Jun/Kari thing...I wanna take that bet too!

This is so good! and very funny too! Continue pleaaaaaaaaaaase? And soon too, I can't wait to read the next chapter .

WriterOfYaoiFics

aka Noriko-chan

You are good. That you are. Very good indeed. I really like your entire 'Japanese Terms Only' concept. I use that too, except for a few mistakes I made, where I used dub names. is truly a good website. I check it out all the time. As to comment on your couplings; I think neither of them is bad. Daikeru/Takesuke is actually my favourite YAOI couple. I like it much better than default couples, Daiken/Kensuke and Taito/Yamachi. I don't even think Jyora is such an impossible couple. True, they don't interact much, but they are definately the two most mature of the Chosen. But sadly, this has not been updated in three months so I wish you'd get to writing chapter 4, much like I wish your sister would get to writing same chapter of 'Falling Into Grace(A MiyaDaiKen fic *sigh*, does life get any better?
And one last thing: You are weird. Now, now, that's a compliment not an insult. Seriously I'd be very honoured if someone called me weird.

U GOTTA finish this!

::fingers Crossed Slut-Daisuke! Slut-Daisuke! . Nee-chan! More! And finish other stories to! I command you, it's my right as your mouto-chan!