Oh, this one with Naruto was really great.

AW... I like this one second best.(The first is Sasuke)Its beautiful and amazing how you mannage to describe things so clearly.

Marveluase job!! Keep up the great work(I keep saying that a lot -.-')!!

puregarnet:D

Aw... Love it! I LOVE the way you mannage to put in some angst while not pileing it too high and making it devoid of hope. Thank goodness of Sakura and Naruto for keeping Sasuke alive!(I'll be devastated if he is dead, after all Sakura and Naruto have gone through as well)

Great job!! Keep up the good work!!^.^

puregarnet:D

Wow... Naruto actually matured... I like him better this way but it still does not change the fact that the whole idea of Naruto and quite in the same sentence is actually a little frightening.(LOL)^.^

sigh... Poor Naruto... It's kinda sad and somewhat dark. Just the way I like(Or inthis case, love) it!!

puregarnet:D

It's good but I think I prefer Kunoichi Season better. Poor Shikamaru, to think he actualy WANTS to please everyone.
Like the ending,

"And when the summer came, the clouds vanished.

And so did Shikamaru."

He sure is like a cloud.^.^

puregarnet:D

Beautiful
Really x

I actually loved it!

It really reflected Shikamaru's character well! XD

A job well done ;o

Awesome. Just Awesome.

Can't wait for the end!

Annie

I LOVE IT. Especially Neji's story. They were so beautiful.

Cute!

wow. you did an amazing job with this story.

i especially like shikamaru's, how you portrayed him and the reasons why he's such a lazy person, etc. it's really nice; it made me think about his character in ways i haven't before.

i also like the connections between neji and winter, it was well thought-out. and the sasuke chapter too!

i think you're a marvelous writer.

Aw! So cute!

It was great!!

eek! That as so kwaii! I just loved that one! You are talented writer that you are.

This was really great! I loved your comparisons; I think you nailed their personalities and matched them perfectly. Keep up the awesome writing!