 AlyssC01 2007-09-28 . chapter 1:D Sweety!
I read this fic purely because it was your shortest one. :) I'm a terrible lazy read. This was definitively not a waste. Lovely fluff. Feeling all warm inside, which says something for the weather we've been having. :) thanks for this fic!
Alyss
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 MeganKoumori 2007-04-28 . chapter 1That was sweet. |
 Aero Tendo 2007-01-19 . chapter 1Very nice :) Ron as Kim's hero and very justified as well!
I like the touch of Rufus also adding in whenever he could. |
 beeftony 2007-01-16 . chapter 1I thought I'd start my reviews of your work with your shortest KP fic. I really liked it. Ron and Kim are spot on, but I must say that with the dialogue making up most of the fic, it comes out looking a bit more like a character exploration than an actual story. Not that there's anything wrong with that. After all, that's what most one-shots are: brief snapshots into the lives of the characters that don't have time to tell an epic tale amidst character introduction and dialogue.
I too thought that Ron was just "going with the flow" when Kim fell for him and didn't really give much thought to her motivation behind it, especially after the kiss robbed him of all higher brain functions (yes, she's that good). It's nice to see Kim explain it to him herself, and his buffoonish density cracks me up. I love the moment at the end where she tells him that he'll always be her hero. Great job. This one's going on my favorites. |
 tanith-4486 2007-01-09 . chapter 1cool |
 The Real Sandy Beaches 2006-12-28 . chapter 1Aw sweet :)
"Sir! Ego sheild has dropped to .5%! The core is exposed!"
"Wait, what is that?"
"It's the gemstone of TRUTH!"
"Wow, it just merged with the main unit!"
"Ego Sheild has fully regenerated and is showing signs of redundantfeed levels unheard of!"
"Whats that mean?"
"It means the Ego has become effectivly invulderable! At least, for now."
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 CastaS 2006-12-17 . chapter 1great one, i enjoyed it much. |
 Tragic warrior 2006-12-03 . chapter 1Nice one-shot. I always thought of Kim and Ron as being more like partners rather than hero and sidekicks but still a nice story. If you give any of my stories a read review and tell me what you think. |
 Nueva Paz 2006-11-20 . chapter 1Aw! This is so sweet! You really have the characters right on, and it's just a really nice little moment between them. Very heartwarming. Great job. |
 daywalkr82 2006-10-16 . chapter 1K/R fluff is always appreciated by this one. Thanks for the good time. |
 Jeriddian 2006-10-11 . chapter 1Good story, and well written. And I know the song, too, so the theme fits very nicely. You've fit it within the KP universe facts nicely. To a committed K/R fan like me, an excellent little story. Keep on writing. |
 acosta perez jose ramiro 2006-10-10 . chapter 1Very nice story. Yes, KP really needs Ron; at times he gets her into troubles, but the girl wouldn't be a heroine without his assistance.
Keep the good writing. |
 RI100014 2006-10-09 . chapter 1Very nice sweet piece that I could see Kim revealing to Ron after almost losing him forever during their Christmas stitch..
Thanks for sharing.
Just a little suggestion though, keep the dialogue separated from you long descriptive paragraphs. Just makes it easier to follow. Thanks again...till next time...adios. |
 Invader Johnny 2006-10-09 . chapter 1Heh, this was a good fic to write down and post, so far I read only a few KxR fics but this defenatelly goes as one of my favorite ones.
Invader Johnny Signing Off. |
 cpneb 2006-10-09 . chapter 1we all need heroes; it's a good thing that Kim recognized hers.
Excellent one-shot. This has only been hinted at on the show...cpneb |