very creepy

Well, powerfull, shows a side to many innocent writers dont get to, and i like it, Write On.

(Looks annoyed
Okay, here's what I think about this fic
Not bad, though, I always prefer the good gys over the bad ones. Still, you DO have a point, maybe not evryone hated Moo. Still, I can't stand slavery and monsters being beat up by cruel owners. If I saw a poor, Tiger being beat up by a cruel owner, I'd teach him a lesson. Right, Molly?

Molly(Grinning) Definetly!

Gijinka Renamon and her Lepus, Molly

This is a very interesting fic, and I like how you tackled the "other side of the story" on how Moo isn't the main villain in the Monster world. Even though the story is short, it really makes someone think about the other monsters' feelings about coexisting with humans. I hope you will expand this story... your fic stands out among those that are predictable, pointless, and uninteresting.

That's sad...

who's POV is this