Nice story. I love that kind of thing. I'd hate to be Rufus at this moment.
I want a Rufus cookie!

OH. I like this one really much. Fist I though it was a litle fast. Rufus wasn't even tired, he just woke up like that and was ngry and so.. Not the slightest tired r newly awake. Then it gott better and eventually turned really good^^ I am also glad you didn't throw in a kiss or something between Rufus and Tseng (wich I feared really. I have read so many fictions and that would not have surprised me a bit...). That pairing is so popular it is getting a bit tiring, but you kept the friendly, and I really like that. A great story^^

My favorite part is when Rufus tells the Turks to do what they want and they all chose to stay with him. Their devotion comes across really well!

Aww! Poor Ruffie-poo! Elena didn't really have that big a prat in this story...Tseng's such a nice guy :D This was really well written. Thankyou for posting it! ...can I have a Tseng shaped cookie?...

*holds hands out, expecting a Rufus and Tseng cookie.. and maybe a Reno one too*

It was good. Reminds me of a friend of mine who was recently diagnosed with a terminal disease... hee.

Not bad of a start! Is this going to later have some kind of central problem to keep things interesting, or is this a one-shot? The problem does feel concluded in just this one chapter.
Virtu-Rufus-cookie please.

Ciao For Now Everyone!

Interesting story. I never really thought too much about the gap between FFVII and Advent Children. It actually seems something that would probably happen to them. All of them seem in character too. Very good!

Aww, they wuv Rufy! XD I love the Turks, are you going to continue this?