SO AMAZING)

Really a beautiful short story. Delves into Edward's mind nicely!

Good story.-Random-

loved it thanks for sharing it with me!)

This is a beautiful story. I loved the glimpse into Edward's mind and I think that this is by far the best portrayal of his inner workings and his tortured thoughts that I have ever read. Not many stories seem to capture that aspect of his mind very well and I loved what you did with it. I'll make sure to check out some of your other work because I truly like your style of writing.

Nice... but hard to read as I've just finished "Twice in A Lifetime Singer" by flamingo1325 which focuses a lot on Edward loving the HUMAN aspects of Bella, more than the Bella herself. It's an interesting idea that I'm glad is not in canon. I just keep hearing Edward in my head, "You ARE warm... You ARE soft."

good you posted it. Its great. I like the way how you wrote it.

Excellent insight into Edward's psyche. Stephanie should have a scene like this in the book to show Edward's turmoil. Great job! -Stacey-

Oh wow, that was incredibly beautiful. A wonderful look into Edward's mind, and so very IC. It was a pleasure to read!

That was beautifully written. I thought it really showed the turmoil that Edward is/has been going through. Well done.

This is probably my favorite Twilight fic. I love reading about Edward when he's showing such raw emotion. I hope you write something like this again in the near future.

your writing is interesting and very nice, if i do say so my self D

love it!

OMG. That was beautiful. I felt Edward's pain. I was actually listening to My Immortal by Evanescence when I was reading this and the song (maybe not the lyrics(I actually don't know the lyrics that much) but the tune) just went with this. You are totally gifted and I have no idea why you thought this sucked.-Brittany

I love your sensitivity Edward's anguish, and sense of humor A/N: italic key?:}.

What classes are you taking at University?

Thanks for your time talent...must read more.