Aw! Malik's so awkward! ^^

I can't decide who to support more...Ryou or Bakura heh

I absolutely love the way you've written Ryou. I can't stand fics where he's a spineless and completely weak character. I'm all for thiefshipping normally, but for once I think Ryou and Malik are just gorgeous together. I hope Malik forgives him soon.

That said, please, please update. I don't normally review and I know its been so long and you're probably not interested in the fandom any longer...but one can hope. Anyways, awesome story!

... I do believe you have just converted me to Bakura/Malik and Ryou/Malik. I liked Marik/Malik before, but now I like those two pairings, as well. Ugh.

Anyway, I think this fic is cute. :3 I like the, uh... Love square. A lot. I just wish there would be more Marik/Malik moments. ... I blame Marik.

Well I don't think I've ever heard of tacos being used as comfort food, but hell, whatever floats your boat. For some reason I can really imagine Bakura being obsessed with Taco Bell >_> Lol, I love the abuse done to him, it makes it more worth while. When is Marik going to open his eyes and realize he loves Malik?! While I am a supporter of any Yaoi, Conspireshipping mostly, I love Bronzeshipping just as much! Oh, and someone needs to gouge out both of Marik's eyes. Well written, so continue it! (I suggest sending it in the Consipreshipping direction, but you don't have to.)

aw, poor Malik

XD Malik must really want to slap Ryou. And I know about that popcorn thing, because...well, mostly because Im a complete moron. But its ten times worse when your BF yelps really loud when you do that...and your parents are in the theatre...

Oh. My. Ra.
THIS IS JUST SO INCREDIBLE! =D
It's one of the first fictions I've ever read where it portrays ALL of the shippings involved with Ryou, Malik, Marik and Bakura with eachother. I must say, you did really well in twisting the story - when it came to Ryou admitting he loved Malik, and Marik wanting Ryou's body, then Bakura flirting outrageously with Malik...man, it was so much to take, but incredible genius! ^_^
//I agree with my hikari, but the aspect I liked was how you portrayed the characters; in particular, Malik. Many authors and authoressess portray him as a cackling platinum-blonde psycho who only cares about stealing the three Egyptian Gods, or in the fanfiction case, someone elses viriginity. However, in this fiction you made him a lot more meeker and a lot more complex than I have ever seen any character get before. Also, you add in humour rather effectively with the real life issues. And, as a last note, I condemn you on when Malik said about Ryou not being as small and shy as he seems. I mean, in half of the fics I read, a mouse would have more of a backbone than Ryou, and he cries the Niagra Falls every two minutes. Your character distortion is incredible.\\
I can't stop laughing at Bakura! XD O man, he's just so hilarious, I'm actually laughing out loud at his antics.
'"Taco'll make you feel better," he said earnestly.'
I cracked my ribs laughing XD I love how you added him in interrupting Malik and Marik's little scene. O, thanks for the little Tendershippy mention. I never knew knives turned Ryou on either, but it's a rather unique turn on...
Anyway, love the fic, and hope you continue to write it in the near future!
//Give Bakura a black eye from me!\\
-Yami Akimoto and Hikari Mayu.

brilliant!

i found this story and read the whole thing. its pretty much brilliant ! i have to say Bakura is my favorite character in YGO and i think you made me love him even more with this story! his character is completely hilarious and oh so charming. i think malik should be with him =D

so cool

Aww... just... aww. I like it a lot. Malik is so cute. I love how you wrote all the characters and their... relationships to each other. And I'm sorry for the dumb review. But please update soon!

Another awesome chapter from you. I love it! Can't wait for the next one.

Hey! I just found this story and it's great! Personally, I hope Yami Bakura gets with Malik!

I love this story. I've been reading it since it started. I remember reading the first chapters so clearly... I didn't have a fanfic account so i had to bookmark all the new chapters in internet explorer. XD It's amazingly well written, and i love the plot. :-)

Only one other thing i have to say, i REALLY don't think Malik should forgive Ryou and Marik that easily, if i was in Malik's position i'd have told Ryou i didn't ever want to see his face again. But that's just me. XD

Keep writing it! ~

Continue! Continue!

Ah, and I thought you just had great DN stories. :D You're doing wonderful in this story, so keep it up, kay?