I know that this was published over 10 years ago, and I have no idea if you still writes for this series, but I wanted you to know that this is a terrific well written story, really one of my favorites. Truly did love it.

Very cute story, but I don't think that Janeway would fall in love with Tom (or believe she did).
We all know what's between her and Chakotay, right? *g
I believe she just loves Tom as a friend, in a mentor/protege relationship.

very good fic

Very sweet and well done! But I wanted more of Chakotay and Janeway. . . oh well, my first Voyager fanfic was of Tom and B'Elanna after "Blood Fever", but this nicely showcased B'Elanna's stubborn determination and Tom's odd loyalty. Keep up the good work.

Ohhh, I like! Chakotay and Janeway are MY favorite pair, and seeing the start is so fun. Well written (just needs final proofread) and engrossing now I'm on to Part 2!

The beginning made me cry! *sniffle* Excellent work!

great story! I really enjoyed it. Write more like this.