loved it. :)

That was beautiful. I really love Kuro/Tomoyo pairings :)

so cute. i like it. nice story

KxT foreva~
This was so nicely written! Although Kuro-tang would probably not be as poetic as this, it was such a good read.
Write more soon! ^o^

Eh, not a bad concept, but I have to tell you, these ellipses are incredibly annoying. I would have liked it a lot more if it was easier to read, but everything kept halting halfway through the sentence and it grew tedious. I also feel that they were slightly out of character (Kurogane's language, at least).

I don't know, it's not bad, but I can see so much potential in this. If you ever get the time, re-read it one day and edit it, and then I'll come back and read it again. ^^

It was really beautifully written! I'm glad 2 c more kxt fics so keep them coming.

That was freaking awesome! Too many people pair Fai with Kurogane, and I'm glad that sonebody actually agrees with me that Kurogane and Tomoyo should be together! Thank you so much for the fic, and please continue it. It would be a shame to let this just sit here. Keep up the good work!

Hey I love your story. I think it would be really cute if in the story will end up with those two together. Keep it up ^_^

This is really good! Although i don't think tomoyo should of thought that kurogane wanted 2 kill her. Kurogane wouldn't do that. Write more kxt fics!

Pretty good 4 the first time. I hope i'll be seeing more of u.

AW! *melts into a puddle of sappy goo*

I love Kurogane and Tomoyo as a pair! I usually imagine them a little more...hyper, you know, Lol. Anyway, this was sweet, will be looking forwards to reading more KTness from you.^_^