this was a good story

Nicely written fic, I liked it a lot, despite the fact that I don't usually go finish fics that end up Original character centered...they annoy me sometimes. Still, this was good.

The only complaint, well, not even a complaint, just a mention, I have is that it was a bit long-winded with the historys and stuff. I know a lot of people praised that, but I found myself skipping entire chapters. Maybe only cause it's late though.

Really good plot though, and well written. And why would someone have to take Mukuro's role? I love her character, don't know why, I just do. Anyway, this is super long. Sorry.

Cool.

I love it! Keep up the good wprk!

wow, this story was great. couldn't stop reading it. i finished it all today (took me a while...er...neglected doing some summer work too:cough). the plot and story were done well and well executed. all the original characters were awesome and the long history of things was great (although long...it just made the story better). this has got to be one of the best yu yu hakusho stories out there. small hints of OOC here and there, but not enough to complain about, and considering the development of the story there's no way the characters couldn't have changed. good job!

story could've been better if Sadako was in it (from The Ring, Japanese version
haha. j/k

anyway, once again, this story is GREAT! best one i've read in a long time.

pretty good so far...i haven't completed the chapter cuz i've got to sleep (got summer school tomorrow .

Wow! I actually found a Hiei and Mukuro fic that is actually completed! The fic is good but it doesn't seemed to focused much on Mukuro. It seemed to focus on Hiei most then it shifts to story telling and explanations. I kinda got lost when Ebony started explaining about Azrael and how her family is involved. The fic is humorous and thats what I liked most about it! I think it will be best to have a list of names though because it seemed to be based on nicknames like Audric calling Ebony, Niobe and for a second I thought he was talking about someone else. All in all, nice fic!

I read this fic on a website and decided to see if I could find it here at , and I did. I LOVE THIS STORY! I've neglected so much school work by reading this, and my teacher got pretty pissed off. BUT, I COULDN'T TEAR MYSELF AWAY FROM IT! HEHEHE, please write some more Hiei/Mukuro fics! I'm thinking of writing one myself, but the rating will be higher up!

WPY

i loved this story.

Wow! I must say, I've only read untill chapter 10, but I'm completely hooked (also, I cheated a bit and read a little out of "Identity"... you filched a few scenes from "Hook", didn't you? "sokay, you pulled it off well!) Your habit of switcheng from a narraration of past events to an explination of sorts of thing occuring as they would if you were there, Brilliant! It's supposed to be "bad" grammar... but it's just so cool!

...Can I put your work on my site? It would make me (and lots of other people) MUCHO happy! Piz? Pwetty piz? With sugar and whipped cream and lots of sweet stuff? consider it! please!-Na

I just love how you write. I love the plot of this story too! Great job! I started reading it like... five hours earlier, and I couldn't stop til I got to the last chapter. Again, great job!

This fic is way cooler than i expected! sugoii! And Hiei becomes more and more Kawaii! i just love the way he repeats the same quote over and over again! I never thought i'd see the day that redundancy would become enjoyable! keep up the good work! love it love it love it!

This is really nice! Hiei is so kawaii! Again, too much history and mental babbling! but nevermind that. The story is way too cool to be marred by simple and insignificant errors! I LOVE IT! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!

very nicely done. Never in my wildest dreams could i have imagined mukuro and hiei together. Its a nice twist though. Most of the fanfictions i've read paired hiei with kurama. The story is nice. The way its written is great. There's just too much "history" though. I mean about the history of the reikai tantei, about hiei's past...

most fanfictions just assume that the readers already know their YYH-history. Not that its a bad thing. I just prefer the "less-history" version. But then, that's just preference for you and maybe its only me. there's no valid reason to change your writing style. unless you consider my whims as a valid reason. hehehe...

Okay, I admit it. On the outside, this story seemed pretty boring, so I passed right by it after seeing it with its summary and all. Then, I decided to drown myself in YYH multi-chapters and yours sorta came up. And I had to check it out. I am forever doomed with curiosity rotting my mind. But this time, my curiosity did me some good. This story is very very very very...good. Sorry, I was never big writing reviews -...Let's just say that your story can rival the actual anime series of YYH and if this actually becomes a movie, (it will make an EXCELLENT movie) I will jump at the chance of watching it. One thing I sorta minded but felt alright with was the Ebony and Kurama situation. I really hope you do a sequel, and Ebony goes with Sean, cause it seems like they have a huge history together. Having Kurama stay single sorta irked me, but nonetheless, I liked how it turned out. I'm glad Hiei got the spotlight for this fic, cause come to think of it, I am sorta tired of Kurama-centured fics. Anyway, good job and hope to see the sequel soon! (Please?)