This story was fantastically well writen, extremely emotionally evocotive... 10 out of 10. I almost wish you would be a Nomura and would continue along this line. Maybe bring in some of the others, could Nanaki see her? Or Yuffie? It's an interesting twist, something I haven't read before. Tragic yet uplifting... I can say no more, but I'm adding it to my favorites.

not bad, not bad at all. Just a few simple line changes could have put Vincent way more in characte. Were he says "well part of me exsist in the spirit world it would sound more in character for him to say simply "part of me exist in the spirit world. again I can't ever see Vincent saying "I guess" it would be way better to simply put "its only natural..." Vincent is a dark untalkitive person. He would never question himself by saying HE guessed at something. He would certainly never voice self doubt. Any way just paying attention to the little things, I think will take your stories to the next level. Kudos on a job well done.

Wow, excellent job. This was such a touching story, and I loved the way you characterized everyone.
It was really so sad and sweet, I was almost ready to cry at bits.
Ace job!

I love this fic!

CloudxSpiritAerith is very possibly even more romantic then CloudxAliveAerith.

I am an absolute CloTi supporter. I never EVER read Clorith fics, but I just happened to see this on the front page and read it. Despite my overall disagreement with your pairings, this was a very well written story ^^
Good job! xP
*And congrats on your...second? review!
I know how great it is to get one, and how rarely they happen X_x

Very nice, thought I disagree with your statement of Cloud and Tifa getting together at the end of AC.
"I can control your brain!" was my favorite line in this fic, great job. :)

~SimpleNClean91~