great one-shot, yeah
very intersting!

Nice one indeed *_*
Theres not much to say D: Its like, awesome, for such a short fanfic ~.~
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only one question; why is it called unforgiven? other than that very good, HOT!

IT's really GOOD! you did an awesome job!... BYE!

I like the story...

OMMFG! SNOW WHITE QUEEN EVANESCENCE! LOVE IT! i didn't really care for the lemon cuz...well, i'm not much of a lemon person... BUT AWESOME FANFIC!! XD XD XD

nice story. too bad its a one shot x.x
-Lady Dei

Oh... Waffle-chan... you write such dirty things!

~Banana-sempai

That was frightening, but way cool! La, the song goes very well with the story. ^_^ Awesome job!

This would've made a pretty sweet story.

I personally loved it! >.<

Please update soon! XD

SWeet story, well authored!

Though i don't think it should be rated M. I reall like it! Good job!

UP DATE ASAP! ^^ please

great story i loved it i hope you will write more stories like this one they are great