What the? I thought I reviewed this. I guess I didn't. Let me remedy that situation.

I think this is an interesting idea. Like another reviewer mentioned, most people choose OoT when you insert yourself into the story.

Keep up the good work, okay?

Not a bad second chapter. To me, it seemed like it stuck too close to the game, but I know it's just the beginning. And, I may be wrong, but I thought the bad dude's name was "Onyx" instead of "Onox."

Anyways, update soon with the next chappie. I want to see how Sara will react to the virtual world. ^^

Nicely done! XD I loved the part when she was trying to get her name as "Sara".

I liked the choice of the game you used as well, most people use Ocarina of Time when they insert themselves in the game. Update soon! ^_^