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Reviews For: Longest Day

An-Jelly-Ca
2007-03-10
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abuseIF I were Charlei I'd request death 2. OMG! Poor Charlie! It was really funny though!
Sushi Chi
2006-11-10
ch 1,
abuseOh. Great story! I feel sorry for Charlie and yet I can't stop laughing.
Jelsemium
2006-10-11
ch 1,
abuseThis looks like it is a funny story, but I can't read it. Sorry, but you really need to break those big paragraphs into smaller chunks. It's too ** my eyes as it is.
The Silent Rumble
2006-10-11
ch 1,
abusepoor charlie! he must feel horrible. No wonder why don comes after us! :D
Good work
meganreeves
2006-10-09
ch 1,
abuseI shouldn't be this amused with how much hell Charlie had to go through. Highly amusing one-shot. Loved it. I have to shnow this to Capoeira. she's had a bad weekend. I think, hope, that it will make her smile.
luvnumb3rs
2006-10-09
ch 1,
abuseI did not know what to do laugh, cry MY POOR FAMILY THOUGHT i TOOK SOMETHING TODAY AT WORK. exceelent.
preciousbabyblue
2006-10-09
ch 1,
abusepoor Charlie... man now that was a bad day.
FraidyCat
2006-10-09
ch 1,
abusea drive-by knobbing? geez, girl, you haven't left me much to work with!
Leoloco
2006-10-09
ch 1,
abuseWow... that was enough whumping for a month! And you crammed it all into one day! :D Poor Charlie..

Loved the story, very funny.
maurbill
2006-10-09
ch 1,
abuseAbsolutely loved it. That was a great one shoter. You really should do another. Boy, you sure whumped Charlie good on this one. Was really fun to read.
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