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| An-Jelly-Ca 2007-03-10 ch 1, | abuseIF I were Charlei I'd request death 2. OMG! Poor Charlie! It was really funny though! |
| Sushi Chi 2006-11-10 ch 1, | abuseOh. Great story! I feel sorry for Charlie and yet I can't stop laughing. |
| Jelsemium 2006-10-11 ch 1, | abuseThis looks like it is a funny story, but I can't read it. Sorry, but you really need to break those big paragraphs into smaller chunks. It's too ** my eyes as it is. |
| The Silent Rumble 2006-10-11 ch 1, | abusepoor charlie! he must feel horrible. No wonder why don comes after us! :D Good work |
| meganreeves 2006-10-09 ch 1, | abuseI shouldn't be this amused with how much hell Charlie had to go through. Highly amusing one-shot. Loved it. I have to shnow this to Capoeira. she's had a bad weekend. I think, hope, that it will make her smile. |
| luvnumb3rs 2006-10-09 ch 1, | abuseI did not know what to do laugh, cry MY POOR FAMILY THOUGHT i TOOK SOMETHING TODAY AT WORK. exceelent. |
| preciousbabyblue 2006-10-09 ch 1, | abusepoor Charlie... man now that was a bad day. |
| FraidyCat 2006-10-09 ch 1, | abusea drive-by knobbing? geez, girl, you haven't left me much to work with! |
| Leoloco 2006-10-09 ch 1, | abuseWow... that was enough whumping for a month! And you crammed it all into one day! :D Poor Charlie.. Loved the story, very funny. |
| maurbill 2006-10-09 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely loved it. That was a great one shoter. You really should do another. Boy, you sure whumped Charlie good on this one. Was really fun to read. |