Honestly, the first thought that came to mind when the smut started was, "oh, ouch, no lube."

But, aw. D: That was so sad and angsty and as;las;als ROXASRIKU! \o/ They're to tragic.

... And I like uke!Riku more too. XD

OMG! Sorry if I'm going into fangirl mode but... *squeal* *glomp* I love you! And I love angsty, pretty, uke Riku as well! I also have a soft spot for this pairing lately. Heh. Lovely job!

hehe... I like Riku seme... but it was okay LOL
I enjoyed reading it... but at the same time i felt so sad for Roxas(since he's my favorite ^^)
hope you write another one!!