Very nice. short, but good.

Yeah too bad for him Kara kills him for the sixith time after telling him that she loves him. Too bad for him and he probably won't be back since there's no Resurrection Ship and the Cylons probably abandoned their Downloading Facility.

Excellent fanfic! You did a great sharing Leoben's thoughts and feelings about his current situation with Kara. This fanfic is almost like a literary representation of Leoben's mind - how he feels about Kara and how he "genuinely" loves her despite of her killing him a number of times. Can't wait to read more Leoben/Kara fanfics from you. You really know how these characters think ;)!

Creepy, disturbing, and completely Leoben. Good work!

Aah, and what has Leoben seen? Is he crazy? A crazy cylon? Or has he truly seen the future? Another one of those questions Ron Moore wants us to be asking ourselves, I believe. Perfect though, I hardly think.

This was really good!