Lovely fic! So glad I got to read it Great descriptions and you did a very good job setting the tone and mood of the story, with everyone in a funk and tired then on to the troubled Zel and Amelia.. Really liked how you wrote both characters and their thoughts.

Wow... Why haven't I read this one before? It's... brilliant! I love this. And of course it should end where it ends, but daym!

a bit late (ok, a lot) coming into this, but a good, well-written story is timeless. thank you for writing this one for me to come across.

Amazing. Absolutely, and in almost every aspect, amazing.

Sometimes the story structure could have been a bit better (that's just cause I'm not a fan of songfics), but the emotions your writing made surface is incredible.
Kudos to you for writing this!

Nicely done.-Ahria

Oh, man, Astra, I had forgotten just how GOOD this fic was. It's so wonderful to visit it again and be reminded of everything that had drawn me to it in the first place. The characterization, the setting, the believablitiy (spelling spelling), just wonderful. Ah, I feel like I"ve been hugged by an old friend. _

That was pretty powerful. I really liked this. I found it on another site but it's still really good.

That was great. Beautiful narrative and descriptions. And you did a wonderful job getting into Ameria's and Zel's minds.

Now that was a nice 'fic... makes you think it's going down a well-trodden path in a good and well-written way! then takes a sharp turn at the end towards the uplifiting. Loved it!

this is easily one of the best zel and amelia fics out there. it incorporates the

lyrics flawlessly, and is totally in character for a romance. it really lets the
reader get into the head of the characters, especially zel. Astra M did a wonderful,

wonderful job. Congrats.

Zel's being a perv. o Still, it's really sad when he comes out of his little fantasy... Zel/Amelia forever!

An absolutely beautiful fic. Well-written, full of love and hope, and you even managed to make it citrusy without being obscene! This fic further proves that you really do know the characters extremely well. I really wish you'd write more fics; you're so wonderful at them! Bravo!

Aren't you gonna finish this?

That was *thinks for a word* powerful...beautiful...I don't know, even though it was perverted, I love how you portrayed the characters emotions! And you kept them very well in character too, I find it very hard to keep Zel in character in my opinion. Very good, I hope you plan on doing a sequel someday.

Hurray! A good Zel/Amelia fic! It's so hard to find good ones these days. So many *BLEH* Lina/Zel. Anyway, I felt a sort of lemon-aura here and I was hoping it would be one...but oh well. Power to Zel/Amelia!