Excellent! The end was honestly quite good :)

I think it was the perfect ending!

thx

Oh! You know he loves her when he offers to give up sweets! Oh my gosh! That was beautiful! '(

Oh, but I loved it even with tears brimming in my eyes... xD

So sad and touching, snd the ending is sweet. I loved it :)

Wow my dear. That was AMAZING! I loved every second of it, it was truly wonderful. I'm so glad glad glad that you uploaded! That was incredible. Well done. I love the description you give, and the detail emotion. *Crys* Well done!

xxStellaxx

Yay! Thank you so much! I love that he told her, and bless what he thought about sweets etc Aww. I liked that it ended there, it fit the other story and the emotions portrayed.

I actually didn't think it was too abrupt. It seems just right to me. This paragraph broke my heart...

"Perhaps you can never truly love a man such as myself, but I can change. If it is my affection for sweets that you dislike, I can give up having them. If you think I am too childish, I can mature. Help me if you can, because I can not, will not give up on us."

Thank you for continuing and sharing. More happy happiness to come, please? :)

OSUSprinks

Good job! Read long and prosper. Always Hopeful