 anon 8/28/11 . chapter 2 I read this story years ago and for some reason it stuck in my head so I had to look it up again. I just love Naga laughing at the end. So perfect. |
 Latias Hylian Wolf 5/28/11 . chapter 2 ... ...Wow. 4/5 |
 chronodekar 8/6/10 . chapter 2THAT was Funny ! With a capital F. Seriously, wonderful read. Definitely captures the Slayers comedy well !
More ! Encore !
Review-ish
Your english is good. I can't find fault with it. I like how you used CAPITALS to indicate shouting. There are some fics where it's abused, but you've done a remarkably good job. The way you quote everyone, (eg Lina: or Phileonel is something I like. No short-forms, but the whole name. Makes it easy to read.-chronodekar |
 kilterra 2/6/06 . chapter 2 lol everyone was sleeping while I read this and I was trying so hard not to laugh too loud to wake people up *. |
 Ruby Red Rose 6/12/02 . chapter 2 Amelia: I was hardly in this one!
Zelgadis: Be grateful*snickers* This is definately one of the best Slayer's faery tales that I've read. |
 Xoni Newcomer 5/13/02 . chapter 2Very funny, very funny, very funny. The twist at the end was hilarious! I tought I knew the story beforehand, but it turned this tale wasn't the one I was thinking of (but mine had a sad princess and a contest to make her laugh too). |
 Shell Presto 3/16/02 . chapter 2this is... hilarious. pure genius. i knew the fairy tale and it *still* shocked me.
i haven't laughed this hard in long time over a fic. and everyone was
in character. i love it!
by the way, i usually dislike fics written in 'play' form, but you handled this
wonderfully. |
 A Champion's Journey 7/26/01 . chapter 2*FDLMAO* OMG! It was NAHGA! I NEVER expected that! That was HILARIOUS! |
 Zelgadis 57 7/4/01 . chapter 1 HAHAHAHA! THat was one funny parody! |
 Rivenchu 6/19/01 . chapter 2Funny! |
 Aloria 6/16/01 . chapter 2LOL! That was a dirty trick to play on Zelgadis! I love this! This is so evil and silly! |