Help
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search
Reviews for: Emmett and the Motorcycle - Page 1 of 4
AshleyLovesEdward
2007-11-13 . chapter 6
it was good!. yes u should make it from the POV's also. that would be great!
mydirt09
2007-09-28 . chapter 7
I like this story because it was very well written.
iwant2bBella
2007-08-07 . chapter 6
ah! i LOVE this story! it maybe me giggle and laugh! it was so cute! you should right them in their prov. because i think they will be very good! i know i will read them and i bet other people will read them especially if they have read this one first! wow good writing! it was so cute! i love emmett! he makes me laugh! and then the ending was really good when edward was sweet and nice about the riding and then the ride off in the distance together on the motorcycle! very will written!
epona04
2007-04-08 . chapter 1
oh thanks for teeling me about this story. love the diff pOV!
Hoku ala
2006-12-18 . chapter 7
I like it!
I wonder what she was going to do with the Motorcycle...
Good Story!
katbaby
2006-12-15 . chapter 6
What a great story. I loved the reasons Bella gave and her thought process. You surprised me with Edward's reaction. I'd love to see his "point of view". Thanks for sharing your story.
kairiyuna15
2006-12-01 . chapter 6
i loved it. it was so cool. please update Emmett's story soon. and i would lvoe to hear Edwards POV also. :)
Droobles92
2006-11-28 . chapter 6
Your Story Was amazing ! well done ! I give you a (virtual) pat on the back ! I loved it ! I love how as I read I understand and love Emmetts personality and his relationship with Bella. The story truly was original. You should definatly write this from Edwards and Emmetts POV. I loved the story and job well done !
inusgirl1030
2006-11-11 . chapter 6
yes i would love to hear this story from edward or emmett's pov
kairiyuna15
2006-11-03 . chapter 4
absolutely awesome chapter.:)
Angel6582
2006-10-30 . chapter 6
Yay! I love how you had Bella ride with Edward. That was my favorite part of this whole story. I think it would be interesting to read the story in either of the guys point of view. I'm up for it! =D
Angel6582
2006-10-30 . chapter 5
Awesome chapter! Bella lesson with Emmett was great! I really like how you ended the chapter too!
Angel6582
2006-10-30 . chapter 4
Great chapter! I still say that Edward should have Bella in a bubble when he isn't around. I think that she would be a lot safer. =P I also really love how Bella needs to be told to breathe after kissing Edward. Those must be some amazing kisses. I need to get me some of those! =P
NotMixedEqually
2006-10-27 . chapter 6
i think it would be interesting to see edward and emmett's POVs. you should definitely try it. update soon please!
nocens-somnium
2006-10-25 . chapter 6
I love this story! I've always wanted a motorcycle, and this makes me want one even more, Emmett and Edward included.
Return to Top