 AshleyLovesEdward 2007-11-13 . chapter 6it was good!. yes u should make it from the POV's also. that would be great! |
 mydirt09 2007-09-28 . chapter 7I like this story because it was very well written. |
 iwant2bBella 2007-08-07 . chapter 6ah! i LOVE this story! it maybe me giggle and laugh! it was so cute! you should right them in their prov. because i think they will be very good! i know i will read them and i bet other people will read them especially if they have read this one first! wow good writing! it was so cute! i love emmett! he makes me laugh! and then the ending was really good when edward was sweet and nice about the riding and then the ride off in the distance together on the motorcycle! very will written! |
 epona04 2007-04-08 . chapter 1oh thanks for teeling me about this story. love the diff pOV! |
 Hoku ala 2006-12-18 . chapter 7I like it!
I wonder what she was going to do with the Motorcycle...
Good Story! |
 katbaby 2006-12-15 . chapter 6What a great story. I loved the reasons Bella gave and her thought process. You surprised me with Edward's reaction. I'd love to see his "point of view". Thanks for sharing your story. |
 kairiyuna15 2006-12-01 . chapter 6i loved it. it was so cool. please update Emmett's story soon. and i would lvoe to hear Edwards POV also. :) |
 Droobles92 2006-11-28 . chapter 6Your Story Was amazing ! well done ! I give you a (virtual) pat on the back ! I loved it ! I love how as I read I understand and love Emmetts personality and his relationship with Bella. The story truly was original. You should definatly write this from Edwards and Emmetts POV. I loved the story and job well done ! |
 inusgirl1030 2006-11-11 . chapter 6yes i would love to hear this story from edward or emmett's pov |
 kairiyuna15 2006-11-03 . chapter 4absolutely awesome chapter.:) |
 Angel6582 2006-10-30 . chapter 6Yay! I love how you had Bella ride with Edward. That was my favorite part of this whole story. I think it would be interesting to read the story in either of the guys point of view. I'm up for it! =D |
 Angel6582 2006-10-30 . chapter 5Awesome chapter! Bella lesson with Emmett was great! I really like how you ended the chapter too! |
 Angel6582 2006-10-30 . chapter 4Great chapter! I still say that Edward should have Bella in a bubble when he isn't around. I think that she would be a lot safer. =P I also really love how Bella needs to be told to breathe after kissing Edward. Those must be some amazing kisses. I need to get me some of those! =P |
 NotMixedEqually 2006-10-27 . chapter 6i think it would be interesting to see edward and emmett's POVs. you should definitely try it. update soon please! |
 nocens-somnium 2006-10-25 . chapter 6I love this story! I've always wanted a motorcycle, and this makes me want one even more, Emmett and Edward included. |