Lovely.

You nearly made me cry again but you didn't. I really liked the particular paragraph where i assume harry said mummy? daddy?

Now onto your next story

Princes Ducky

that was a great one shot!

it does get the point across. so bittersweet...

This was absolutely beautiful. Very haunting. Excellent job.

that is so sad!

That was a moving story. I feel that you have potental. Keep it up. This one was good.

wow. that was really good, kinda sad, but really deep. soulful, you know?