Whoa, I can't believe I haven't read this before... *smacks self in the forehead* Anyhow, that was really good... The conversation between the two, Jen's inner thoughts, everything was so damn believable... I always love your stuff!

One hopes that Taylor filled that hole for him. :) This is a great vignette, very well done.

Eric and Jen? That's a new one (for me atleast, never read a fic with that pairing). I liked this story.

I loved this pairing for a long time now, but you REALLY made it come to life! It seems very Eric-like to me to wanna move things along into the bedroom, the whole passion of it...he had a lot of passion in him, in one form or another.

Great short story, maybe someday we'll see more...

Very nicely written little ficlet. I like the way they go from not liking each to kissing in a believable sort of way. Where there is one emotion there is often another. Also I like the first person view point, quite tricky to write I find.

Sheesh, Eric was ready to pull her into the bedroom just from a first kiss? That's way too fast. Oh, but this was very good overall. I could see Jen dumping pretty boy Wes for him.

Aww, love it. Very nice one-shot, good characterization of both Jen and Eric. Part of me would like to see this expanded -- not necessarily into a Jen/Eric romance, but just to see how these two would interact in the future. But as it works perfectly as is, I guess I'm content.

One of my favorite quotes is that 'a talented writer can pull off any imaginable pairing' and you proved that with this ficlet.
Great job! A perfect background setting for any possibility of Jen/Eric-ness (probably the only canon one in the entire show), but you kept it real by keeping both them so well in character that they realized they wouldn't have a future together.
Speaking of future: My favorite line was Eric's 'The future I’m worried about is a lot closer than a thousand years away.'
So totally Eric!!
A terrific story. So well though-out and eloquently written. But then again, this is you we're talking about, after all ;)
Hugs from Dany

Very interesting story. Nice incite into Eric's feelings, and how Jen and the other felt towards him during the beginning when he first entered the picture. Also like the twist you added, especially with Eric commenting on how he has seen how Wes looked at Jen. Guess Jen has two guys, trying to win her heart. Though her and Eric do have a lot in common, too much, as both of them agreed.

Jen and Eric... Now those are two people I would've *never* pictured seeing together. Now that I read it, I can kinda picture it.

Excellent fic! Looking forward to more!

Good sory so far.