Quote: "Instead, her older brother paled and asked if girl spirits came after boys, too."
I couldn't stop laughing.
I wanted to review at the end of this story, but I really liked this chapter - and its so funny how Zuko si caught up in so many awkward situations with girls *gasp* lol
This story is written amazingly - i love it.

Wow, Amazing!
I loved how you used the tales of Ba Sing Se, very clever. The whole idea was so individual and imaginative, 10 out of 10. Definetley one of the best fanfics I have ever read!
Keep writing
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THIS.IS.THE.BEST.STORY.EVER!

I almost cried when I read the ending. My mom asked me why I looked like I was going to burst into tears.

Please make a sequel. Please.

This is the best story I have ever read. I read it about 23 times.

Make a sequel in which zuko finds the avatar and katara.

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.

omg...
I LOVED THIS STORY!
&& I LOVED THE ENDING!
AW!

i wanna dance in the dark..
:pp

zomglolzthatwasthebestzutarastoryever!! Woah i shold have takin a breath :P!! but im serious this rocked you should so make a sequel!!

Why haven't I reviewed for this? I've read this story more than maybe 5 times and I'm still impressed with your skills. I mean, for a PWP fic, this is tremendously GOOD. Each chapter is long, but the story is short and to the point. I like that. Not many stories are like this any more, so I've gotta give you props, even if this was written about 3 years ago.

I'll be reading this story again whenever I have the feel to read Zutara. And someday, I'll start reading your other Zutara story, Rhythm of the Rain. It's been hard to read fics lately...lol. Thanks for writing this!!

That was awesome!1!

You should make a sequel.

AW...THAT'S SO GOOD! AMAZING! BEAUTIFUL!

I'm pretty sure I've reviewed this fic before (it's one of my all time favorites) but after rereading it again for the umpteenth time, I am once again in awe of the skill you put into this story. I know you considered it a work of boredom, but in my opinion stories like this one are what makes fanfiction worthwhile. A wonderful plot, filled with memorable humor (the old men taking bets are my favorite) and wonderful characterization. You could probably guess that I have read Rhythm of the Rain as well and was absolutely amazed. But I just felt the need to reiterate how wonderful I think your fics are. I sincerely hope I will have the pleasure of reading another one sometime in the future you are an extremely talented writer and reading your work is a joy.

...god, that was just like totally awesome. I'm serious. You built up the Zutara romance for several chapters, supsended our disbelief like heck, and then "We're going after the avatar." AWESOME. Shockingly, you actually kept the two IC. I didn't think that was physically possible either. Sequel? Please?

Zuko felt his face growing warming. Was he blushing? “No!” he shouted. He diverted his eyes to his breakfast and began shoveling rice into his mouth like he hadn’t eaten for days.

I can just imagine this being animated. It really fits the style of the show. And then when they're like "twenty on her"! Aw. And Zuko's inappropriate thoughts and... yeah. THE NECKLACE. AW.

Well I though the whole thing was done really well! If you have another 'I'm bored' fic's, you should think about typing a squeal!

AH it's so sweet! I loved it!

I actually think the ending was suitable and not entirely rushed. The point was that it was plausible and meaningful, in my opinion. Lovely job. Your story writing skills are really good.

Great story