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GreaserFreak13
2007-06-25
ch 2,
abuseGreat idea for a story!
NixBabySis
2007-06-04
ch 7,
abuseWOW I totaly love it!
Katsaya
2007-05-14
ch 7,
abuseHUrry with the next Chappie! This is really good!:)
fullyxalive
2007-01-06
ch 7,
abuse:D

I liked this chapter. It was cute.

Update soon!
Jennifer
2006-12-05
ch 7, anon.
abuseI have read all of your other stories and I think you should do Steve next. I don't know why, I just like Steve for some reason. He's cool. Anyway, I love the way you write! This is probably my favorite story from you just because it's Two-Bit! Kelly, you're an awesome writer, so write more!
-Jen
Honeydukes013
2006-11-25
ch 6,
abuseAwe, Two-bits such a good big brother
The Hyperactive One
2006-11-24
ch 6,
abuseWhat allxthatxjazz said. Good stuff as usual.
fullyxalive
2006-11-23
ch 6,
abuseAww, that was cute.

Update soon.
The Hyperactive One
2006-11-14
ch 1,
abuseCool story so far. Also, I like your version of Two-Bit's sister; it's always interesting to see people's portrayals of her.
fullyxalive
2006-11-13
ch 5,
abuseGreat chapter. Please update. :)
Points
2006-11-13
ch 5,
abuseYour plot is good, but your grammar is a turn off. It's pretty good, other than when you're doing quotation marks. If you fixed it, the story would be a lot easier to read.

Its really good though :)
fullyxalive
2006-10-31
ch 3,
abuseAww.

That's so cute. Poor Two-Bit. No one really knows what's happening with him, and you've really captured (I feel cheesy saying this) his soul.

Update soon.
fullyxalive
2006-10-31
ch 1,
abuseIN CHARACTER.

Lol, I always notice if it's in character or not.

Wow, this is very well-written, and I'm glad that you mentioned TWO-BIT'S little sister, and not Soda's twin =P

I really like this. A lot.
Honeydukes013
2006-10-28
ch 4,
abusePoor Pony. That must be rough!! Update quickly!
linda5576
2006-10-27
ch 4,
abusehey great story it sound so much like twobit update soon
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