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| GreaserFreak13 2007-06-25 ch 2,  | abuseGreat idea for a story! |
| NixBabySis 2007-06-04 ch 7, | abuseWOW I totaly love it! |
| Katsaya 2007-05-14 ch 7, | abuseHUrry with the next Chappie! This is really good!:) |
| fullyxalive 2007-01-06 ch 7, | abuse:D I liked this chapter. It was cute. Update soon! |
| Jennifer 2006-12-05 ch 7, anon. | abuseI have read all of your other stories and I think you should do Steve next. I don't know why, I just like Steve for some reason. He's cool. Anyway, I love the way you write! This is probably my favorite story from you just because it's Two-Bit! Kelly, you're an awesome writer, so write more! -Jen |
| Honeydukes013 2006-11-25 ch 6, | abuseAwe, Two-bits such a good big brother |
| The Hyperactive One 2006-11-24 ch 6, | abuseWhat allxthatxjazz said. Good stuff as usual. |
| fullyxalive 2006-11-23 ch 6, | abuseAww, that was cute. Update soon. |
| The Hyperactive One 2006-11-14 ch 1, | abuseCool story so far. Also, I like your version of Two-Bit's sister; it's always interesting to see people's portrayals of her. |
| fullyxalive 2006-11-13 ch 5, | abuseGreat chapter. Please update. :) |
| Points 2006-11-13 ch 5, | abuseYour plot is good, but your grammar is a turn off. It's pretty good, other than when you're doing quotation marks. If you fixed it, the story would be a lot easier to read. Its really good though :) |
| fullyxalive 2006-10-31 ch 3, | abuseAww. That's so cute. Poor Two-Bit. No one really knows what's happening with him, and you've really captured (I feel cheesy saying this) his soul. Update soon. |
| fullyxalive 2006-10-31 ch 1, | abuseIN CHARACTER. Lol, I always notice if it's in character or not. Wow, this is very well-written, and I'm glad that you mentioned TWO-BIT'S little sister, and not Soda's twin =P I really like this. A lot. |
| Honeydukes013 2006-10-28 ch 4, | abusePoor Pony. That must be rough!! Update quickly! |
| linda5576 2006-10-27 ch 4, | abusehey great story it sound so much like twobit update soon |