hey, i just finished reading the past chapters and i really like it! I'm interested in betaing it, i have a profile so check it out and let me know if you're interested

I would love to be your BETA if you like, I'm from the Netherlands so I can't gurantee there wont be one mistake in it but my english is very well:) and I have betaed others.. so If you need me..;)

heya nic,
really enjoyin the story so far! i can beta those chaps for u if ya want - only thing is that it would hav to wait till after wednesday (27th) as i have an exam so im studying full time (except for when im reading fic [bad kiera]).
anyways, if u dont hav any luck finding anyone, let me know!

Kezz

hey this is a really good start! i know you've probably stopped with this story but i really like it! keep up the great stories

please update soon.
i love this story

wow your a really good writer! your fic made me cry && ii felt bren's pain lol very heart-wrenching!

keep up the great writing! can't wait for the next chapter! :D

i love it plz update soon

Will Tempe now have a heart-to-heart talk with Angela on her feelings? What about Booth? What will she say to him.

very interesting. But I can see where she is coming from

~ Bella

just catching up on your chapters. I can't wait for season 2 to air here, but I like what you've done so far. Looking forward for Bren & Ange's talk.

Hey i spotted this over on LJ and then remembered that'd i'd seen it on here too, so figured i'd come and check it out. Great story, looking forward to the next up-date.

still goin great, can't wait for more! :-)

I really enjoy reading these chapters. I would love it if they worked some of these things out in the show, but you're writing does a good job of examining the emotions behind the actions. Keep up the good work!

wow...that was really good! keep going with this story i totally love the angst and you got it perfectly with booth choosing cam over bones that seems like a perfect way to get her to break and i think that russ taking his anger out on them was great! youre doing a wonderful job on this story!

Huzzah for Russ! He's such a good brother. Reminds me of mine. This was so good. Love the protective, ticked-off Russ, love how he and Tempe interact, love the guilt! Please continue!