that was amazing...you've totally nailed the ray/neela dynamic here. There is absolutely nothing forced or unbelievable about the characterisation here. The whole thing is really well crafted and moves along gracefully. Really really good.

I really like the story but think we should know what happends after Neela leans close to Ray. I think they should have Ray/Neela (a.k.a Reela) together on the show because they have so much history together but that also means that Tony was the easy choice.

So I didn't get to this quickly, but I told you I'd get here eventually, right? Right. Good.

What I liked; characterization, more comments on Ray and Neela below but I liked Weaver, I liked Abby and I liked Frank. They seemed spot on to me.

Neela: was more Kitty-esque empowered-female than I remembered, but I could see her going that way and have no idea what series I was seeing up to. I can and did dig that.

Ray: I think you maybe, just maybe, heart-of-golded him, just a bit. I don't remember him being so...in touch with his feelings and good guy. There were moments- like the chunk with Pratt- where I felt the voice was really good but I don't know that it was coarse enough in other places.
Only other thing was that some of this felt a little rushed, or...jerky or something. It flowed well, but not perfectly, if you know what I mean? You do? Good.
On the whole: I liked it. You know I like how you write and this was no exception. I liked the plot and I like how you played it out.

Wonderful and totally sweet. Now if only we could get that to happen on the show...

I loved it. That was so sweet and funny, I loved the end, it was, how can I say it, PERFECT, BRILLIANT, really it was just perfect, I'm so sad that this story is finished but I really hope that you write another one soon, I mean, you have to write another story, ok? (about the roomies of course) haha. I hope you do, because I like a lot the way you write, it's very real and amazing. You're amazing (sorry for saying this again) and I'll be waiting for your next story.

Saludos

Hee! Love! But you knew that. Loved the way you reversed the dialogue from "Only Connect", and *snicker* Abby's apartment is a one bedroom. :D Neela's gonna have a 'room'mate, all right. And something tells me she's gonna be getting less sleep now than she *ever* did before. And loving every minute. :D

i sure as hell enjoyed it :D it was good, really good! you should write more soon...

GOOD JOB!

Aw, sweet fic! Thanks for sharing.

Cool story. You kept the personalities of all the different characters brilliantly. Most importantly though, I love happy endings!)

Sweet ending. I love how they talked things out and she convinced him to stay. This was a wonderful story.

Aw, the ending was so sweet :D

Love it!

okay i don't like it

I love it, excellent job can't wait for the next chapter.

i defenitely liked it! please update soon...sooner lol)

Good job! Love it. I wonder if Neela is going to stop Ray from leaving... Anyway, I can't wait to read more. I hope you can update again soon.