hurry with the next chapter this is getting good!

Howdy! I've really enjoyed you're fanfiction (the authors notes are cute too), and I've a little dissapointed to see that you haven't added on... I'd love to see how the rest turns out!This is one of the few stories I've enjoyed, and I'm hoping you won't give up. Give it some thought...

keep it up man, you're doing good (besides making us wait for about a year...)

Nice changing Haru's mood around, please hurry on the next chapter, it's sort of the perfect time to help with that lemon Braller44 was asking for since Haru is staying in the night with Elie all alone... ;) can't wait till chapter 9

this story is full of strange twists wonder what will happen next. what will happen between haru and Ellie now that he is staying the night, wil he have to kill her or what that would be most disappointiong

YOU FINALLY UPDATED! YAYZ! Ok...IT WAS AWSOME!

thank god you finally brought out the next chapter. i'd almost given up on it

NICE. xD

PLEASE update soon. If not you shall be cursed forever... by PIE! DUN DUN DUN! xD Nah jk, but really, please update soon.

I noticed that from chapter 1 to the latest, your grammar and spelling has gotten a lot neater, too. ^_^ Yay.

Haru does seem a bit OOC, but it's a great story, so all's well. xD

Wow this is great can't wait for the next chapter. Will we find out more about haru's past and where his sister is and how his parents died?

Awh jeez I still feel bad! Aha but glad to see a new chapter up! (Who doesn't get distracted by that Google-owned beast that is youtube!? ) Aha, I kind of like the mood jump for Haru =D Looking forward to your next update!

This was a good chapty please make another chapter soon!

O.O *remembers what said about grammar and all that* Oh jeez that was mean! I'm sorry! D: Sorry...about the uber late review too... -_- Short! Chapter! Killing! Me! He's not dead right!? You wouldn't do that =D

this story is cool please write more

Hurry up with the nxet chapter and could you make Elie and Hura have sex

omg make more already!!