Yes yes YES! I L-O-V-E! that chapter!! But your not writing anymore, are you? Eh, well, at least you 'ended' it on a good note. I know you're no longer continueing it, but it was an absolutely beautiful story that I was honored to read. Thank-you for posting it!

GO LETTUCE! Beat the oppressors girl! Heh, I LOVE this fan fiction, so cute! Poor dear, trying to defend herself and then acidentally hitting them in the face. I think its rather realistic actually, good work!

I loves it

*claps hands*

This is great!

Great story! Onto the favorites list it goes!

nice

That was very cute.

Me luffs oh so much. FAVE!

ITS A REALLY GOOD LXP FIC! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

XD! THIS ROCKED! WAY TO GO 'NEE-CHAN!

YEAHNESS! THIS ROCKS MY SOCKS (that I'm actually wearing now. It's cold.)!
"Taruto, being the mature young adult he is, promptly burst into tears."
XD! That part is hilarious when she drops her casanets. XD! GREAT JOB!

ohh! KAWAI!

great!

Hurray ! Pai kissed Retasu ! Life is great !
Awesome chapter, sweet, fluffy, and kinda sad at the same time. I can´t wait to read the continuation. You´re better at writing romance than you seem to think !

Se-cond chap-ter was awe-some! Se-cond chap-ter was awe-some! Se-cond chap-ter was awe-some! Se-cond chap-ter was awe-some!
:D This was absolutely wonderful and sweet. I really liked the last two sentences. Brilliant way to finish an excellent story and I will be waiting with eagerness for 'What Happens When You Come Back to Life'! Pai and Retasu forever!! n.n

Till Next Time,

SweetAsHoney