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alyssaaa
2008-03-27
ch 2, anon.
abusethis is so sad. I can understand why little sammy dont like hunting =( But the thing is, no matter how sad it is, your story is great
gaap237
2007-12-15
ch 1,
abuseThe best "Sammy's first hunt" ff i've read so far
savanna
2007-10-14
ch 1, anon.
abusei loved it! absolutely brilliant!
KatieLB
2007-09-20
ch 2,
abuseI love the way you have john written... he doesn't know what to do with a sammy... he is use to having a dean who does what he says without question...but sam is a whole new ball game and you have it nailed perfectly...great job on this
KatieLB
2007-09-20
ch 1,
abuseoh poor sammy... he wanted so much to be like his dad and dean and he just wasnt!! Great intense part with the daddy furball... great chapter
thisaccountisnolongeractive...
2007-08-22
ch 2,
abusegreat story yet again. i love this story i have read so many stories and seen so many episodes about sam hating hunting and this was such a good explanation for why. i am amazed by your writing ability.
sentarla
2007-03-19
ch 2,
abusewow...very powerful!
Alas it is 12.40am and I have school tomorrow. Will come back and read your other stories tonight. You are a very good writer. PLease keep the pen moving :-)
Valtira
2007-02-15
ch 2,
abuseThis was a great story - so Sammy, so Dean - So JOHN. Love it!
astalder27
2007-01-08
ch 2,
abuseOh man, you're going to make me cry! So cute, I love it. This is way different than the other stories out there about Sam's first hunt. I loved the very last paragraph, it was so sad. I cant wait to read you're other stories
j
2007-01-06
ch 1, anon.
abuseTHAT WAS THE BEST F*ING STORY IVE SEEN ON THIS SITE SO FAR!I LOVED EVERY LITTLE BIT OF IT!AND I M THE QWEEN OF CONSTUCTIVE CRITISIZME AND LET ME TELL U THAT DIDNT NEED ANY OF IT!I loved how sams youthful innocents let him think in such a diffrent way from any body else!i loved how he felt so guiltey once he realized there was more to monsters then killing and evel.I loved how he thought that if it was a mother that ment it did have offspring who were in a way just like him.(i know im over using the word love but hey i loved this!)i loved how sam was a child thrilled about his right of passedge as a hunter but then a depth came to him about the deeper part of the world.i loved how he though that mabey as people would kill animals like deer to feed their familys mabey thats why the monsters did there jobs.I LOVED how he was able to past the black and white of good and evel and mabey see that it had nothing to do with that.that it was all about survival!and how mabey monsters didnt kill out off hate for humans but out of the love for there familys.i also loved how realistic the charecters were.(u know as realist as a family who hunts demons from hell can be:P)How sam was so exited how he couldent cock the gun.How dean backed him up and how john wasnt rageing at the flick of a switch.this is with out a doubt the best thing ive read by anybody on this site.u were very true to the charecters from the show u didnt morphe(misspeeld i know and so is miss spelled lol)them into a perfect being like so many do.i am so reading any thing else u post.plz become a perfessional writer you definetly have what it takes.plz post more kyriebess im going to look for that thing you said you wrote before uh solo hunts or somthing?yeah thats the name of it.plz write more!u rock!(holy F* i wrote alot!) =D
Sammygirl1963
2006-12-28
ch 2, anon.
abuseI thoroughly enjoyed your story. Your descriptions of the hunt were so vivid that I could picture them as a movie running through my mind. I think you captured the characters wonderfully. I look forward to reading your next story--I hope you choose to post one.
Thanks
irishgirl9
2006-12-12
ch 2,
abuseThat was a great story! Poor Sammy getting hurt like that.
pizzapixie
2006-12-12
ch 2,
abuseI really enjoyed this story. You kind of took a little innocence from Dean , too, at least from his blind faith in his Father! Good job. Thanks.
Nana56
2006-12-05
ch 2,
abuseI loved all of it! I was reading your related story and followed your recommendation to read this one, too, and am very glad I did. It really does show why Sam feels differently than his father and brother about hunting. Poor little Sammy! Really good.
ohcEEcho
2006-11-29
ch 2,
abuseAnother piece of insightful and fascinating writing! ^_^ Sam's emotions were so vividly described I could almost touch them. I don't think I've ever felt so afraid as when Sam was in the truck waiting for the second male...(shivers) this was awesome!
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