DO NOT DISCONTINUE IT!

I don't know what a Mary Sue IS.

NO! you can't discontinue I will be REALLY **. I love Faxness-but poor Fang

NO! DON'T DISCONTINUE! BAD IDEA! I really like this story, please please please don't discontinue it! The drama works well with the story, and the touches of humor are great. Are they getting their own Voices? LOL, I know it's the implant, but the similarities are brilliant!

I like it. Very interesting. Are you going to break into the original story because right now you are following it pretty well but for them to meat you would have to break in, right? Oh, and what is a C2?
Good Luck
Samantha

woah...fast pace story...but good all the same

Um... very confusing so far, but I really really like it! It has so much potential! Very interesting, and your descriptions really make the scene come alive!

That was good up date soon

uh oh...if Jeb is afraid then the folck is in deep drouble possibly too deep to recover. *shakes*
Good Luck
Samantha

interesting! keep going!

Sounds interesting!